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I like action and I am very good at action choreography. At least I am often told that regarding my written works.

I feel that I am sub-par at drawing with my best merely mediocre, above average writing, so and so humor but exceptional action choreography. And it seems that choreography is the hardest thing for anybody to get down.

I find fight scenes to be more enjoyable to draw then anything else or at least less unenjoyable. I also sometimes find myself getting wrapped up in these and actually having a little fun.

Anyway I normally choreograph action with the scene consecutive. But decided to give just jumping around and keeping everything in about the same time frame a try.

Then result is a slightly more intense scene though a little confusing. Reminds me a bit of the action scene at the end of the transformers movie. I enjoyed that, but know most people don't. So I probably won't do this again.

1 and 2: You know this is probably a big reason there weren't more Rowdyruff boys episodes.

3. Boomer's Boo-boo, is that an alliteration? Or something else?

4. Maybe she forgot that being on their side doesn't mean he is 'on their side'.

5. That kick looks wrong.

6. I really didn't want to do this, but I couldn't think of an alternative way to get the plot going forward that wasn't worst.

7. The way the panels are scattered makes it tough to see whats going on, but he actually sucker punched her when she turned.

8. Brick isn't aligned right with Buttercup.

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11. Bubbles looks like she is trying to become the world's youngest or at least cutest sex offender.

12. That sounds waaay too much like flirting. I really shouldn't have put that giggle in there.